Once upon a time red riding hood was a unrespectful little girl. She would not listen to her mum and dad so ended up grounded. One day her parents asked her to take a basket of fresh red apples to her grandma at the end of the bath. Red riding hood did not listen to her mum. So her mum told her “If you do not do what me or dad tell you to do then you will be grounded for threats of your life.
Red Riding Hood felt really angry and had to take the basket of apples to her grandma.
So she was off into the forest. Her parents had forgot to tell Red Riding Hood that there was a big bad wolf.
latter on Red Riding hood nearly reached the end of the path until the big bad wolf jumped out of nowhere and asked her where she was going. Red replied i am going to my grandma’s cottage at the end of the path.
The wolf thought to himself “I can gobble her up and then the grandma two meals for dinner yeay”. The wolf golbeld Red riding Hood up starting from the head down blood puddles everywhere. “Now its time for my second meal grandma.
The wolf ran off with blood running down his mouth. The wolf finally reached the end of the bath. He opened the door and walked in he sow grandma asleep and gobbled her up too.
He was really full so ran back into the forest to have a nap. Red Riding Hoods parents never felt better before with their daughter gone.
THE END
Hi Taami,
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed your rendition of Little Red Riding Hood. It was a good read and i enjoyed the twist to the story that you have added. Remember to read over your sentences to make sure it says what you mean it to say. Keep up the good work.